I think this is a great first attempt at motion graphics. However, the words appear to move for the sake of movement, rather than flowing and leading into the next statement. There are also spots where the composition is at odds with the reading structure (Think: if this were paused and the screencap shown to an outsider, would it make sense? there are a bunch of spots where it would not). Also, I think the use of visual symbols works, to the point where it is a shame there aren't more "word pictures" or visual symbol graphics in general. Despite my criticisms, the basic format works and it is relatively simple to understand. Good job, and keep pushing!
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